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Written by Aidul (Aidulrimbawan.blogspot.co.id)
Uttaran movie tells the story of the Indiandrama, the plot is too complicated example, Tapasya replace Icha on her wedding day, so Veer's wife, at the time he divorced.Then have a child from Rathore.After realizing his confusion, Tappu willingly married to Tej Singh, one family member Veer.
In later canceled on the
day Icha married with Veer, married to Vansh (brother Veer).Vansh meniggal,
then married again with Veer.film this Indian drama can not play a lot of
feelings and the logic of conflict in this drama.Icha eventually married Vans,
brother Veer who also fell in love with her.Even if his mother Veer, very
annoyed with the two sons that crazy about a girl named Icha, he was forced to
approve.Tapasya is not achieved love Veer, agree to a divorce, with the
intention of making hidupa Icha-Veer suffer.But others say life plan.In short,
Vans later shot by Tapasya, and eventually died.Veer with Icha instead beunited
in marriage.Despite having a boy named Yuvraj, his mother still did not receive
the actual Veer Icha as his son's.he always tried to separate the two.finally,
Veer lost some memory.Veer knowing his wife was named Icha, but forgot her
figure.It occurs when the new Icha gave birth to her second child, named
Methi.And disaster received by icha come, Icha should go to jail for being
accused of killing a wanita.Padahalonly to save the life of a boy named
Kanha.This causes Icha separated from her husband and children for a dozen
years.at the time, also has spawned Tapasya Mukta, daughter with Raghuvendra Pratap
Rathore (who were in prison).he willingly chose to leave her daughter with her
parents, Jogi and Dyyivya.and left his family for a dozen years, with a sense
of hatred.
The Correction of Idol's text:
1. After realizing his confusion-> it should be “ after he realized the confusion”
2. In later canceled on the day Icha married with veer, married to Vansh (brother veer), it should be “ later after canceled Inca's wedding with veer, she married vanish.
3. Vanis meningeal the married again with veer, it should be “Vanish died then marries ....”
4.Film this Indian drama can not play a lot of feelings and the logic of conflict in this drama. It should be “ this Indian drama doesn't make sense”
5. Ichacha eventually married Vans, brother veer who also feel in love with her. It should be “ ichcha eventually marries Vansh. He is Beer's brother who also loves Ichacha.
6. Even if his mother veer, very annoyed with the two sons that crazy about a girl named ichacha, he was forced to approve. It should be “even if veer's mother is very annoyed with her sons who crazy in love with Ichcha but she agree to ......”
7. Veer with Ichacha instead be united in marriage . it should be “ Veer and Ichacha was getting marriage”
8. Despite having a boy named Yuvrah, his mother still did not receive the actual Veer I cha cha as his son's. It should be “ even if they have a baby named Yuvraj,his mother still doesn't accept her”.
9.he always tries to separated the two. It should be “she always try to separated Ichacha and Veer.
10. Finally, veer lost some memory. It should be “finally, Veer lost his memory.”
11. veer knowing his wife was named I cha cha but forbid her figufe. It should be “ it occurs when the new Ichacha gave a birth for her second child named Methi.
12. And disaster received by Ichacha come , Ichacha should go to the jail for being accursed of killing a wanita. It should be “and a trouble gets Icha, icha should go to jail because she has been accused of kill a woman.”
13.padahal only to save the life of a bit named Kanha. It should be “but actually only to save a boy lice, named Kaha"
14. This caused I chacha separated from her husband and children fie a dozen years. “This make ichacha separated from her husband and children for 3 years”
15.at the same time,also has spawed Tapasya Mukta. At that time Tapasta give a birth with Reghuvenda (who was in prison)
16. He willingly chose leave her daughter with her parents,yogi, and Diuya. It zgiuks be “he willingly chose to leave her daughter.
17. And let his family for a dozen years, with a small of hatred. It should be “he willingly choose to leave her ddaughter.
18. and left his familly for a dozen years, with a sense of hatred. It should be”and leave his family for three years.
